Let us be positive, you could try and improve your story line because it seems all over the place. Also I know it’s tiring to not use abbreviations but at least try not to abbreviate, you could try read other comics and see what you can improve on.
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Life(♡ MTNP♡)
What the.....?
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Waffle-chan
actually its not drawing she used a game for the characters and some edits in it soo it sucks
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IM THE WEEBOOO
this sucks
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gacha life_lesbians:3
I don't understand a single thing going on soooo this story and comic is useless
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Yuri
the drawings are nice but kinda childish 😂😂😂😂😂😂😂 I don't even know if it has a story line or not
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MBlack
wtf its first place 🤧
and it has not story the drawing sucks ass it's so stupid 🙄
MBlack: yep and it sucks like hell 🙄
Tata girl 💜: yes it is
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Nicklanz Lalan
WTF is this???
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Heart Of The Melody
Uhhhhh ok? look it's a cool story but I don't understand a thing
and it has not story the drawing sucks ass it's so stupid 🙄
ok?
look it's a cool story but I don't understand a thing