Schemes of a Beauty

I think the author did not express well the sorrow and hatred that the mc should bear. I think the author wanted to express her deep love towards him which turned into hatred because he reneged on his promise. After all, she loved him to the extent that she fought alongside him in war and barely survived it, and he discarded her after all of what she did for him. These are what the author had failed to express. The author should have not compress all these in just one chapter or a few illustrations. I know its not easy to draw but if you really want to tell a good story, one must painstakingly put effort into it. Im someone who believes that if you want to share your abilities to other, you should do it with your utmost effort or best. Why? Because as an artist or author/writer, it doesnt matter whoever made/wrote or thought of it first. It was who whom made it exceptional. Who cares if it was a rip off if it was excellently made. TBH, I had read lots of chinese novels with the same plot. But why I dont get tired of reading the same reincarnating-and-seeking-revenge plot? It is because these rip offs were well-thought of. They have substance. Although they are lacking and have plotholes but they were made with effort and heart. Yes this story is made with effort but it definitely lacks heart - a heart to tell stories. Well, this is just the first chapter tho. I dont know what lies ahead.

I like the ending already. Thank you to the author for completing season 1. Happy that season 2 is coming but If you ask me the ending is quite satisfactory already. Better than most endings on this site actually. I am afraid that the next season will just make things too complicated between main characters. You know unnecessary misunderstanding/fights between the main characters. That would ruin an already good story for me. If season 2 came hope the main characters stay as they are. True to each other. I like how consistent the ml was Towards the fl. There were no stupid hindrances between the 2 main characters such as amnesia... Sometimes when character relationship's going well, authors insert such scenarios. Stretches the story but ends up ruining it...for me that is. The author made strong characters from beginning and a good story line. story had a good flow. Character progress was good. Needed more romance, but ok nevertheless. I am all for the romance so i am truly grateful to the author for creating steady characters. They had faith in each other. Trusted each other and cared for each other. Also love the extras at the end. For me it's well done. Thank you author and translators.

The FL character reminds me a someone I know. She's impulsive and not naturally calculative. She is straightforward and honest and in her perception as long as she she knows the truth, she will speak up. She gets frustrated at injustice and immediately wants to remedy the situation. Unfortunately she will have a long road ahead battling against her own personality and character. Luckily she has elder Mr Ye to force her to slow down and think of the solution so she doesn't charge in and speak and make a fool of herself making accusations with no evidence to back her up.
It's alright to have a female lead who is this type of person. She will grow and learn and hopefully remain a straightforward caring person.