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Concubine of Wealth

Zuoan Comic
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A sheet of contract and a ransom of ten million changed her into a close maid to an evil-like billionaire. Although once a rich young lady, she was made a puppet nowadays. He tried his best to torture her only for her to give birth to a boy to revenge against her family? In an attempt to flee away from him, she learnt how to seduce men and contribute her body, swearing to identify who was manipulating her life.

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Peejay Mejarito
Hi Author ! I appreciate your work so I'll give you my rating opinion. Hope you appreciate this for further improvement in your future works.

There are 3 things to discuss:

FIRST the story plot was not consistent, the timeline and the introduction of the characters. Also the MC were not concerned about her son, If you planned that the MC regret giving him a son, it should be stated in the story while she is plotting for her revenge. Moreover the personalities of each characters were also not in sync to the personalities you have given them in the first chapters of the story.

SECOND the Arts, it is understandable that you really want to finish the story but as an Author, you should mind the consistency of the artwork, it may not be that good but being consistent in hair and eye colors, faces are the most important assets in your work. it is like remembering peolple with their faces, same goes with these characters.

THIRD the story itself was not justified. The flow of events, the rising of the event, climax of the story, the falling event and the ending. it is just like you just end it the middle.

P.S no hard feelings because I really gave this a shot because I was hooked since the beggining of the story. 😊
aesgemg: I agreed.. was expecting something else
Sugalice4: and 4th, author shouldn't end the story with a hanging question like we are expecting for a book 2 to get the answer
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I don't like where the story Is going like I don't really think she cares for her son on the first time they met she looked like she hated kids and now she be like oh I love u soo much my child~ and I em losing interest in reading this and the art I'm fine with it cause I don't really care what it looks like I only care on how the story goes soo yeeh- 🙄
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I was half asleep and wasn't reading clearly then I saw him said she can have an accident and I was like yet? what's that suppose to mean, do you plan on killing her in the future?
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